“What?!! I don’t believe you! You are lying…”
“I’m sorry, I didn’t…I mean I…”
“Shut-up! No more, you idiot, stupid fool. The next time you plan a picnic, bring the fucking picnic basket.”
33 words total
The Trifextra challenge this weekend:exactly 33 words inspired by the picture at the top.
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Categories: Trifecta
Tags: 33 words, challenge, creative, flash fiction, forgetful, language, short story, trifextra
This is good.
Thank you.
*hahaha* I was expecting something much darker, given the first few lines. I loved the bait-and-switch!
I girl’s gotta eat 😉
One would think that would be at the top of the list but no, no…He must have been too nervous about the date!
Thank you for linking up!
44 words he would have been off the ledge 😉
hypoglycemia …
I can claim to have forgotten obvious things too haha Great piece!
Thanks! Never the food, though, right?!!
Hahaha, yup, that’s got to be it!
🙂 Not burying or killing anyone this week 😉